If you post music like this (that’s yours) then you’ll be on the right track to being scouted
If you post music like this (that’s yours) then you’ll be on the right track to being scouted
Thanks! i never thought that someone would like my music
It’s a bop, I feel like it’s too techno for the art but still a bop!
Thanks for the feedback!
This feels like the cutscene where you like either see the fish or like visual novel ah talking to the fish. It gives a good sense of unease like the fish and repetition when used right (like this instance) can make it feel illusional. Good job
Thank you :)
This kinda misses the mechanic part of the art. The brass overpowers certain melodic lines and the lyrics have been cranked through the grinder and sounds awful. The song also feels more like a space thing but that’s just me.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
It's a stylistic choice, but I understand that we clearly don't have the same vision, which remains legitimate. This isn't 1984, after all.
Musical creation being subjective, it's normal to have our own different opinions and different musical tastes. Some will prefer Chopin and hate Cannibal Corpse, others will love Snoop Dog and be displeased by Penderecki.
Now the song is goodish, the main problem is the amount of repetition is unpleasant, but the melody and instrumentation was done well. However, my biggest pet peeve about this is the fact that I’d have to say the art and the music don’t feel matched. The art is more of a glitched space and I can’t judge much on art as I’m no artist, however the music haves a more threatening feel like something bad is about to happen which isn’t the vibe being sent off by the piece of art.
I understand everything here, especially the repetition gripe. However, this is the way I interpreted the art. It’s what I felt when I looked at it so I took that direction when I was making it. Either way, I appreciate you being honest with your feedback, and thank you for listening :3
This sounds fine, the main issue is it feels directionless and messy. The instruments are in a sort of out of sync like a poly rhythm but it’s done in a way where it doesn’t harmonize well. The melody also clashes with the organ playing the chords and the percussion feels out of suit. I hope this helps for future songs.
Yeah. The jazz is not my type to makin music.
I like the sounds used in the song and the rythmn is nice, it's just too repetitive
thanks for the feedback!!
I am a composer/violist who loves music. I’d gladly help make music for projects, and just ask to use any of my already music.
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